Tan and nizel was good friends actually they were best friends. Nizel was a very beautiful girl and fell inlove to a campus hunk named david. And soon david and nizel became friends, Nizel was so busy impressing david she forgot about tan. Tan was was very lonely every time nizel and david are together. Nizel once approached tan and told him that she and david had a kiss. tan became angry and suddenly walked away and nizel shouted "whats wrong with you?" tan replied angrily "Theres nothing wrong with me,Its you ". Tan cried while walking home. On the other side david asked nizel for a ride, while driving nizel home they passed tan walking and nizel saw tan crying, and nizel started to frown. When nizel got home she immediately called tan. The phone phne rang and tan's mother answered it and nizel asked for tan.and tan refused to, but her mother asked tan answer nizel . So tan picked up the phone and cried again nizel asked "What happened tan?". Tan replied "There are so many things in this damn world, Why did you have to forget one thing?" and nizel replied "What is it?", Tan shouted "Its me, Its me nizel why do you need to forget me, Does all our memories dont matter to you? all our smiles does is mean anything to you?". And tan's mother decided to go to tan's room because of tans anger. Mean while Nizel replied " i know your problem tan,Your jealous, Tan david is only my friend, Youre still my best friend". And tan replied "Is this all i am to you? im only your best friend? Youre so busy doing crazy stuff for david you didnt noticed". And nizel asked "Didnt noticed what?". And tan replied "You didnt noticed that i loved you" then banged the phone then rushed to his room and found her mother smiling. Her mother asked an to sit beside her and tan sit beside her mother and cried into her mothers shoulder and her mother smiled and said tan why are you crying are you gay?. And tan smiled too, While her mother and tan is smiling her mother asked tan " Do you really love nizel" and tan replied "Yes ma" and tan's mother said "If you love her ,just love her you dont need to ask something in return". And tan's mother asked tan to sleep. The other day tan ran to a 24hour convenience store and bought 3 black roses after he bought 3 black roses he ran to school and saw nizel and he ran faster . He was 10meters away from nizel but he was accidentally bumped and rushed into the hospital . After class nizel was informed about the accident and nizel rushed in to the hospital but he cant meet tan because he was on the I.C.U Room and unconscious. Tan's mother and nizel were waiting for the doctors statement. While waiting,Tan's mother and held nizel hand and said "Since the beginning of your friendship, tan had loved you. And the doctor came out abd said who is the patient's mother, and tan's mother stood up and the doctor said "Ma'am were sorry, Youre son is dead" and the doctor gave tan's mother the 3 black roses and said "The ambulance saw this near the death place of your son" And tan's mother gave it to nizel and said "I think this is fot you" Then Tan's mother cried and also nizel. After two days nizel was found dead by his parents in her bedroom and saw a ballpen pierced in to her vein in her left wrist and they founded a letter and opened it. The letter said "Sorry dad mom, Tan died because of me and tan died without knowing i love him too.i shall follow him for tan to know that i loved him as he loved me.
-Renato Magbalon III
-Renato Magbalon III
The End
Guys sorry kung medyo wrong grammar dyan di ko p kasi na re write bsta pinaghirapan ko lang inexpress ko lan gyung nsa utak at puso ko.because i blog not to impress but to express.sige guys till here.comments are very welcome =P.
2 comments:
nice one nats... hehe... medyo natamaan aq don huh.... eun... galing mu tlguh gmwa ng mga like that... :)
keep it up... bout dun sa wrong grammar, wla nman aq nkita mali xe im carried away nah sa story... hihi...
one more thing,
bout dun sa part nah "youre son is dead"
it should be *your* without the letter *e* ...
and i think it would be better if youll rephrase it to:
*your son passed away* hehe...
sorry kung pkielamera q huh...
tc olweiz... :)
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