Tuesday, May 8, 2007

It just comes out from my creepy notebook!

i wrote this for like past two months.nag iimagine kase ako kung ano sasabhin ko kung makakahanap nako ng right love. ewan ko kung bakit ang kalabasan ay prang "what are you looking in a girl?".ewan pero eto just judge it JUDGE-MENTALLY.joke. :). tinitle ko dito before i die it supposed to be a song pero eto lumabas.ewan basta.!.

Before i leave
i want to let you know
that i love you and will always be
i didn't told this before
because i am afraid to get hurt
i am afraid that you'll say we are just friends

Everyday i had prayed
that i had the strength to say
that i love you and i care for you
but until now my lips are empty
so i wrote this for you

I know that this confession is too late
but i don't intend to disturb
i just want to show what my feelings needs to express
this is what my heart's longing for

I love you not by your trends
but i love you by your inner beauty
You are different among then
you put your self humble and silent,
you do not spread lust
and don't consider yourself beautiful
even though you are really beautiful

But there is one thing that i had fallen for you
you don't push yourself to the limits
thats the only thing that i had found in you
that makes me glad because there are few like you in this blessed earth




Ang haba no?.haha.yung kulay green yung text yun yung nag strike tlga sa puso ko!
yung ibig sabhin kse nung you dont push yourself to the limits that means na kung mag boyfriend/girlfriend plang kayu no SEX no LUST.kse these times mrme nang babae ang na divirginized in a young age because of pre-mature relationships.so yun mag 1 o clock na antok nren ako sige ingat nln sa inyong lhat. _nats.ΓΌ





9 comments:

Anonymous said...

yah right... teens nowadadays are always engaged in pre-marital sex... *sigh*
em glad we're not one of them and never will be!...

anyweiz, nice poem huh!... to whom are you dedicating that piece? uuuyyy... hehe...

Apathy said...

"pre-marital sex" suddenly became "in" these days., if you're still a virgin,you suck and you don't belong in the "in" crowd.

good to know you're not one of them.., i don't want to be one either..

better be that way or you'll regret it.. take it from me

(off the record-i haven't engaged in any.. lolx)

krisha said...

Editor side (haha!)
"i didn't told ('tell' pow dapat ^-^) this before"

Critique side (haha!)

love this line! :D

"and don't consider yourself beautiful
even though you are really beautiful"

Anonymous said...

tma ka natxx. agree ako sa sinabi mo at dun sa nka highlight na color green na taludtod. [tma ba] hmm. wllng. pro tma tlga yon. mraming tao ang bbta pa pavirgin na. hayy. mrami ka namang kilala dba?.

anyways. gusto ko sna ishare kay ANO ung poem mo. kso bka maewan nia lng. hahaha. uhh. ibg ko sbhn, tpos na ako sa part na yan eh. nakasurvive na ako sa 'pag amin' ng pag mamahal SKNYA. haayyy.

TC paratE!.

Anonymous said...

uiiihahaha. XD

DUCKIEPOT.:* said...

OMG. The poem is so nice. Patama siya swear. Natatamaan ako. :( Bleeh. What is with sex and relationships? Bakit laging magkadugtong yun? Ang weiiiird.

DUCKIEPOT.:* said...

Everyday i had prayed
that i had the strength to say
that i love you and i care for you
but until now my lips are empty

Yan, diyan sa part na yan ako natamaan. :((

DUCKIEPOT.:* said...

Aww. I made around 42 songs na. And, 10 palang dun ang na-share ko sa iba. :))

Anonymous said...

You have some grammatical errors on the song but it's fine. :) Hehe

Hay... Premarital sex. XD I'm not for it NOR am I against it. I think it just depends if you're ready or not. If you're responsible enough na rin. Hehe

Take care :)